Chapter 1 is Rewritten!

I have finally – after ONLY two months – finished rewriting the first chapter of A Chocolate Battering, further expanding it from 3 1/2 pages to 6 (to read, click on Chapter 1, rewritten over in the right-hand column under A Chocolate Battering).

I feel pretty good about it, but as always I could probably obsess over it for another two months and still not be satisfied.  I am amazed at how difficult it is to do any kind of writing with three kids running around!  I’m lucky if I can get in 10 minutes of uninterrupted writing.  The last thing I want to do is neglect my kids, but the idea of getting up at 5AM does nothing for my artistic flow.