A Chocolate Battering is now rewritten!

Thanks to this blog, I have finally rewritten A Chocolate Battering.  I now have the Original Version and the Rewritten version now available on the right.   I feel that the Rewritten version is a huge improvement; the plot has remained the same, but some details have been tweaked, and the story has been fleshed out a bit more.  I’m always open for feedback, so please leave me an honest opinion in the comments section.  That’s what helps me improve my writing!